kernalphage's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ode to Pie]

needs effort...

everyone loves pie, but you need to put effort into such a great topic.

get that average up!

maxc16 responds:

haha thanks ill try and make a better one

[-=Pen and Paper=-]

needs a bit of work...

i've never seen a pen do that.

one thing you might wanna do in the intro is define a [hit] area for the play icon. it wont be seen in the final movie, but it will make it so you can click anywhere to play, not just on the lines.

keep on learning!!!

Grumbles responds:

Yeah, sorry bout that I realized that too.